Topic/Thesis: Deviations in the novel represent our eagerness to judge those who defy the "norm"
Essay Outline:
First Draft of your Essay:
paragraph 1: explain deviations and what defies them, what happens to them?
paragraph 2: explain the fringes, introduce sophie, (dont judge a book by its cover)
paragraph 3: talk abot how the judger is the one that looses out ( for every action there is an equal and opposite reatction)
Group Members: Tom Yun Nikie Martin Josh Chu
Good Copy:
Peer Comments: Introductory Paragraph Questions: 1.Does the introduction paragraph grab your attention? Does it anticipates an insightful thesis? 2.How strong is the development of the argument for the whole essay?
Body Paragraphs Questions:
1.How well are the quotations integrated and analysed? Have they been chosen with care and taken from a variety of chapters?
2.How strong is the development of the argument for the whole essay?
Concluding Paragraph Questions:
1.Does the conclusion include a reworded thesis, summary.
2. Does the conclusion have a memorable ending?
3.How strong is the development of the argument for the whole essay?
Topic/Thesis: Deviations in the novel represent our eagerness to judge those who defy the "norm"
Essay Outline:
First Draft of your Essay:
paragraph 1: explain deviations and what defies them, what happens to them?
paragraph 2: explain the fringes, introduce sophie, (dont judge a book by its cover)
paragraph 3: talk abot how the judger is the one that looses out ( for every action there is an equal and opposite reatction)
Group Members:
Tom Yun
Nikie Martin
Josh Chu
Good Copy:
Peer Comments:
Introductory Paragraph Questions:
1.Does the introduction paragraph grab your attention? Does it anticipates an insightful thesis?
2.How strong is the development of the argument for the whole essay?
Body Paragraphs Questions:
1.How well are the quotations integrated and analysed? Have they been chosen with care and taken from a variety of chapters?
2.How strong is the development of the argument for the whole essay?
Concluding Paragraph Questions:
1.Does the conclusion include a reworded thesis, summary.
2. Does the conclusion have a memorable ending?
3.How strong is the development of the argument for the whole essay?
Good Copy in MLA forma